Saturday, October 27, 2012

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Rating: 4.8

We live and die
Say hi and bye
For all the sake
Don't let me wake
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Fatima Obaid
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Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2015

A lovely short poem...........................10

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Akanksha Bhatt 24 September 2013

oh I am also a DIRECTIONER... and glad to know you are also...

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Aung Si 02 November 2012

Short but inspired writing.Keep on composing poems.For this, my vote is 7.

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A B 29 October 2012

v nice poem with a postiive note embedded in the end....finding a ray of light, , , gud write

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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2012

Powerful! A few you meaningful words that clearly are thought provoking and touching! A very positive message filtered through this short but amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent is shown in this great write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Yash Shinde 28 October 2012

short and meanngful................very legant in its simplicity yet very sublime and complex loved it :)

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Akanksha Bhatt 28 October 2012

so beautiful write by you my friend...! :)

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Saeed Jan 27 October 2012

Nice write... Exact and to the point.... Nothing superfluous... I read some of ur exquisite poems, but here U seem to be at ur best... Mature writing, thoughts moving towards a specific direction.. Well done... Keep it up.. S-Jan

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Sossi Khachadourian 27 October 2012

What a nice poem, short but meaningful, thank you for sharing have a peaceful day!

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