Monday, August 20, 2007

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Too many moons have passed to
justify the pain. Blaming you for
the sadness in the far off sky I
kneel beside the sea and cry.
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David Blake
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Corey Threet 03 September 2009

That was a beautifully dark poem I really like it though its sad. What's funny is I started to read it because in 1993 the greatest thing happened...I was born. Lol no I'm kidding but even after 16 years your love still burns thanks and remember...Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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Riquetta Elliott 09 May 2008

Thats a very good poem and it capture the readers attention about your love for someone.

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True love lingers disturbingly long even after all hope has faded. Your poem captures that nicely.

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