Saturday, April 11, 2015

199. Why Can't We Comments

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Why can't we admit that we are flawed
instead of trying to perfect ourselves
perfection is a lie designed to make us fall
and so we do not rise the way we should
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Bri Edwards 11 April 2015

#200 didn't 'sit well' with me, so i moved on to #199. i like this one, though it obviously has NOTHING to do with ME. after all, i AM perfect...............in ever way i can think of at least. yes, i can't praise myself too highly. the sky isn't even the limit! ! BUT, this poem is good for THE REST OF YOU to read and ponder! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - favorite lines: many remain staring at where they believe they should be and Maybe we should admit we are wrong instead we burrow deeper inside ourselves hoping to be proved right this time being wrong is not always a bad thing ........ of course I never have to admit being wrong, since i'm NEVER WRONG1 thanks for sharing and congratulations on over 200 on PH. bri :)

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