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There is no doubt you are a firey teacher from which many would enjoy learning because of your passions for growing and sharing....But to me Kolawole it is the rhythm or the cadence also that has a presence in this work and makes it that much more enjoyable..... Thanks for asking me to read.....Your friend Jim Troy

YOU KNOW YOU HONOUR ME ALSO WITH THIS PIECE. THAT YEAR THE NEW COMER WAS BORN. THREE MOONS AFTER JENUS THE GATE KEEPER OPENED THE DOOR. THREE MOONS THREE COMPLETE JURNEY OF THE SUN THROUGH THE HORIZONE. tell me, why did u choose this date?

Historical poetry with blend of coup d'etat -> ‘coup de grâce’ ...oh gosh…why blood shade …still it is shedding…why but? ...share my sorrows to be empathic with the victims… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS ~ Peace ~ Peace ~ Peace n

Hey man, I like Emerson, I like Cecero, I like this poem. Keep on aspiring high.

Very well done, wonderful interplay of imagery and history. thanks for sharing Michael

how personal history is interconnected with world history!