Wednesday, October 26, 2016

198. Forgiveness Comments

Rating: 4.8

I forgave you so many years ago.
I forgot your offence that day
When you made my colourful dreams pale
By crushing my soft mind
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Dipankar Sadhukhan
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Prabir Gayen 29 November 2018

Fine one..................thanks

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Kiranbabu 29 June 2018

Very nice n heart touching poem

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Britte Ninad 17 May 2018

Beautiful loving words- I forgave you my dear When the colourful dreams fell From the branches of my mind and heart. nice 10++++++

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Wonderful expression, nice to read poet.

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 December 2016

A heart-warming poem; the candid expression of an open heart - a heart filled with love. A lovely poem!

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Koyel Mitra 18 December 2016

Feelings of broken heart nicely expressed.10

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Sarmistha Mukherjee 17 December 2016

A very fine poem. So touching..10

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Nandita Sengupta 17 December 2016

A touching poem.... so nicely composed.10

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Richard Wlodarski 15 December 2016

And by forgiving, you shall gain enormous strength in mind body spirit. Beautifully expressed emotions in artful poetry.

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Seamus O Brian 10 December 2016

You have sounded a deep well here, good poet. Forgiveness....what really is it? Is it really forgetting? I do not think so. If someone stabs me, I may forgive him, but every time I see the scar, I will remember. You may break my heart, and I can forgive you, but every time my mind recalls your face, I will remember you, and forgive you again. Forgiveness is not an act, but a state of being. To illustrate a little more humorously, how can you write a poem announcing that you have forgotten the things that you detail to us what your lover did to you. :) Yes, much to meditate upon, and your well-written piece brings these considerations into the light. I love the image of your colorful dreams turning pale. Again, well-written, good poet. Thank you.

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Marieta Maglas 07 December 2016

I enjoyed reading your poem. It is wonderful. Voted 10.

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Mashiur Rahman 30 November 2016

Best wishes for u................

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Joe Hughes 25 November 2016

Thank you for asking me to comment. Such a difficult subject. Best wishes, Joe Hughes

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Alice Cordy 23 November 2016

Lovely penned. Omitting forgiveness is our own personal release.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 22 November 2016

Thank you so much dear poet Mr. Edward Kofi Louis for your comments.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 22 November 2016

Thank you so much dear poet Mr. Subhojit Kar for your kinds comments on my verse.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 November 2016

Life! ! We all need forgiveness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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R Soos 21 November 2016

Despite the time when you made my colourful dreams pale, the poet cannot help but think of better memories and wonder... =: -)

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 22 November 2016

Thanks for reading my verse.

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Subhojit Kar 19 November 2016

Feelings of a broken heart beautifully expressed

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Baharak Barzin 12 November 2016

So tender and fresh poetry

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 12 November 2016

Thank you very much dear poetess.

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