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Impact felt.a jumble of images brought together and tied with a bow. Well done.

Intriguing.... Lots of fleeting images, in many ways similar to 'God Bless America', but conveying a different sentiment. Like it.

As my father so profoundly says about life...'Nobody gets a free ride' I think that this tells so much of what he means by this Love duncan X

Succinct juxtapositions here. Cleverly crafted, utterly appropriate beating rhythm. t x

Hi David this was really good, I love this small poem. It was fun and light to read. You have good imagery and excellent rhyme stanza. Take care.

YOU DO PAINT A NICE VERSE THERE, DAVID...TWAS'BOUT18 THEN...AND A FIRESTORM OF TROUBLE....STILL AN lol...10 FOR OUR GOOD OLE' DAYSI N THE SUN, OR UNDER THE MOON, WHICHEVER WORKED BETTER, EH? ...A TEN FOR OLE' TIMES''''''''''''''''''FRANK

I wanted to thank you for your advice....and yes, recently I have opened the door for one more try.