Saturday, October 8, 2011

1967 Mustang Comments

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It had a 289 and four on the floor,
Mickey Thompsons all around.
At nineteen I couldn't ask for more,
It's wheels barely touched the ground.
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Juan Olivarez
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Kim Barney 06 May 2015

Great poem, Juan. Just one small suggestion: change IT'S to ITS in line 14. Trust me. I used to be an English teacher. Thanks for sharing.

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Smoky Hoss 16 March 2012

Amen pardner... I understand, every last word here!

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