Tuesday, December 11, 2007

1967 Critiqued After All These Years Comments

Rating: 5.0

I recall the many crumpled pieces of paper
It took to complete a single thought
The noisy typewriter and the worn out erasers
Would petition me to bring an end to their plight
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Ted Sheridan
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Not a member No 3 15 September 2008

There's a greater tightness in your writing these days Ted... an effective punchiness that gives it more strength I think. I like this a lot.. and a little later got to know much too well the territory you were crossing then... jim

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C.R. Ebowski 31 January 2008

I received that email too! ! ! ! ! ! ! But I like your write better.

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Chris Mendros 09 January 2008

but doncha' just love the smell of nicotine in the morning?

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fanniesson - 17 December 2007

A surprising delight some poems just get to me. Great ending also.........

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C.R. Ebowski 11 December 2007

i caught that show too.....i like your 1967 best! ! !

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Ian Bowen 11 December 2007

Ted, jogged a few memories for me. Well written piece. Ian

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