Swank back,
swing arse
girls of glass.
Don't pass them
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Glad you liked my Pictures poem Sally. I was only three years old in 1957 but remember hearing my parents talking about them out dancing etc.Like me going back in time can bring some good memories. Love the style of this poem. I see you wrote this nearly three years ago, it sounds really new and fresh!
55 the time of jive crepe sole shoes an a pint of mild, hot time in the old town tonight. thje poem is alive...regards
A great write, i remember my nights out. Good times. A great poem.
That takes me back, just finishing my National Service and going in to Norwich to see the lads and have some fun
I heard the 1950's where an interesting time and your poem proved that. Brief and simple truly gets the message across and i thank you for writing this poem *applaud*
I honestly cannot remember where I was at that time but a great write and I love the style. Hold on, I do remember wearing a pair of grey crocodile winkle-pickers but forgot when and where...lol. Must read more of Sally Plumb Plumb! . Ron.
Economy of words. Great poem. Well thought out, well laid out. Thanks for sharing
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