I was admiring the clean car this morning before it rained
With my newspaper in hand I paused momentarily to notice its beauty
My wife had cleaned it yesterday; from vinyl top to rubber bottom
The windows were spotless and the upholstery was polished
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I have only just come across your work, and I have enjoyed it immensely. This is the kind of 'catch the moment' poem I love reading. Immediacy in the commonplace.
This is good! ! But how do you get your wife to CLEAN the car, and then apear in her nightgown! ! ! ! LOL>... Bonnie
YOUR WIFE CLEANS THE CAR! ! ! ! ! Hell, I'm hoping a certain someone doesn't read this. Now, I'm just off to admire my new shoes from all angles..... :) t x
My wife appeared at the front door in her nightgown.... There is just something special about a clean car and hood ornaments your sense of timing you sense of pause s unique..10
drive the Night-Gown like it was a 1953 special Buick. i would. take care.
Classic car and classy wife...what a combination...and what a ride! Zen
did your wife read this.....................?