Wednesday, October 10, 2007

1953 Buick Special Comments

Rating: 4.9

I was admiring the clean car this morning before it rained
With my newspaper in hand I paused momentarily to notice its beauty
My wife had cleaned it yesterday; from vinyl top to rubber bottom
The windows were spotless and the upholstery was polished
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Ted Sheridan
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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

did your wife read this.....................?

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Martin O'Neill 06 January 2009

I have only just come across your work, and I have enjoyed it immensely. This is the kind of 'catch the moment' poem I love reading. Immediacy in the commonplace.

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Bonnie Collins 26 November 2008

This is good! ! But how do you get your wife to CLEAN the car, and then apear in her nightgown! ! ! ! LOL>... Bonnie

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YOUR WIFE CLEANS THE CAR! ! ! ! ! Hell, I'm hoping a certain someone doesn't read this. Now, I'm just off to admire my new shoes from all angles..... :) t x

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My wife appeared at the front door in her nightgown.... There is just something special about a clean car and hood ornaments your sense of timing you sense of pause s unique..10

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Ronald Stroman 10 October 2007

drive the Night-Gown like it was a 1953 special Buick. i would. take care.

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Zen Bojczuk 10 October 2007

Classic car and classy wife...what a combination...and what a ride! Zen

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