Thursday, October 20, 2005

1914 Iv: The Dead Comments

Rating: 3.4

the years did to him
like they had to wines
a calmness, mellowness
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john tiong chunghoo
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David Desantis 29 April 2008

wow...beautiful. I love the equation of year to wine, calm mellowness in age....very good man

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Fred Babbin 07 December 2007

A coincidence - I am a Buddhist.

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Riquetta Elliott 05 December 2007

John your poem made me feel so calm and mellow. I have to crown you for writing your poem so well written and enthused. Outstanding work please persist to write more.

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Ivor Hogg 03 October 2007

If only the human race matured as a whole race instead of as seperate individuals the world would be a better place Yet each life contributes something to the overall tapestry

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Lee Degnan 08 October 2006

Awesome write, John, I enjoyed reading this one....

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Debbie Kean 11 August 2006

Oh, awesome! Your poem is so evocative, wonderful... I love the idea of wine and people mellowing...

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Meredith Creek 04 December 2005

WOW! Great work. Meredith

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Steve Armstrong 22 November 2005

Hi John, Loved this, very good wording! A 10 from me

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Mary Nagy 24 October 2005

John, This is very lovely. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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