Monday, January 19, 2015

182. Numbness Comments

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Darling I'm done
I'm in a puddle on the pavement
broken glass is littered around me
my black Samsung laying in my left hand
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Daniel Brick 20 January 2015

These are the ironic thoughts of a dead man? And his main squeeze is dead too? Was there a car accident? He apparently is admitting they lived too fast, too dangerously and now life or is it death has dealt them its final message. Hey, you guys, you were supposed to slow down! Now you're just down - forever! Is that the gist of the poem. WOW.

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