Saturday, November 4, 2006

(180) Pondering Comments

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Bad news came my way once again today.
A young friend of Mom’s passed away.
It’s something we come to expect now the
years are flying by, old age is upon us.
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Melvina Germain
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Brian Dorn 07 November 2006

Melvina, I like how the poem drifts from thoughts of sadness to thoughts of joy and worship. There is a wonderful message in this. Beautifully done! Brian

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2006

Time, never still, always accepting it's role as the Grimest of Reapers...but only at Times....Melvina...A splendid piece of lit. Don't know how you take the most ordinary events of life & then turn them into a Main Event, here on site..Hey, i think that rhymes...hah! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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