18 The Month Of May Comments

It's an interesting thought and there's a rhyme..

Oh yes, May is an exhausting month and I can definitely relate, a short, jaunty, vivid visual painting here, thank you for this

Brilliant as always.......

I really liked the playfulness of this poem! Keep up the good work buddy!

great poet you are guy and by now you know why MAY DAY MAY DAY GONE BY

A wonderful succinct poem that vividly depicts the kind of climate particularly the month of May. Well crafted write.10+++

Also, because of global warming and other environment related issues, temperature all over is increasing rapidly.

Undoubtedly, May is the cruelest month in India.

Summer breeze creeps into the dryness..Beautiful poem

Thank you, It is a beautiful poem, so much vivid, you really feel it.

THANKS UNNIKRISHNAN, It is a small but beautiful poem it brings the SUMMER alive in one's mind.

Very Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Truly Hope You've Found Brighter Days! ! ! ! ! Many, Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++++ Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

Nice work, short but highly inspired

A brisk and terse verse saying a lot

Not to cry! ! Only to respect the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautiful... My dear friend. And let me just reply... The month of May, Let me just say It comes and stays With those beautiful days..... Zoila T. Flores

It's the most accurate description of May i have ever read. Personification of May is very beautifully done.

Short and sweet personification. Yes, May is a teasing month in so many ways. Thanks for sharing. Well done.

Oh! You proved it! ! Brevity is the key to expression! ! ! Your poem is like an arrow- it streaks right to the bull's eye and doesn't waver or drift! ! ! ! Yes! That is exactly what the breeze does when it is so needed- -it stops at the door! This is a jewel, my friend. I give it a 10++++++++++++++++

The month of May in India is like a cruel schoolboy playing pranks on his friends, the heat and the elusive breeze! Great write!