17th In Michaelmas 2011 Comments

" Silence, all around, only far away you hear a frail fall of leaves..." (Giovanni Pascoli)

Flowing bubbles of repetition and alliteration are part of a concealed meaning: adultery has to be deed I think.

Beautiful! A Monet! This lady knows what she's doing.

I love all you have to say. please keep it coming.

Lakes coalesced, mirroring merging anima, companionship, felicitious times. The lack of him devilish. beautifully engraved on rune of blue yet eyes to sip joy of gloss unleashing aroma..wrought ingeniously by imagery and metaphors

Wonderful imagery. Marvellous depiction having groovy collocation. A beautiful poem that any one will like. Thanks for sharing........10

Hi Rachel, Very nice imagery and an evocative style of suggestiveness. Very imaginative. I like the choice of vocabulary. Kind Regards, Paul

A very powerful and effective poignant write conveying message of Mahatma Gandhi. Thank you so much for sharing.

Lakes coalesced, mirroring merging anima, beautiful writeby imagery

you lyrics, word by word is full of meaning l enjoyed very much.

conclusion` is no solution to the way we feel...the real deal in the cycle of life....pup

Love it...great write indeed.

Wow, your words flow so amazingly through my skin, I just got the chills! ! ! ... Fantastic

Are you trying to excite me Rachel? Good to see you in joyous form.

Great piece with vivid write.

Imagery is raw, I can picture it. The Gardener has issues to contend with... lol

very good composition, great job.

Enjoyed the word flow, and the imagery, thanks for sharing.

Great to see you back, Rachel, great poem.

Clever way to go round reality of life in relationships without stating only suggestions like a mirror you the self make up the mind of the reflection...+++10 regards