۩ A Brainchild Of Both God And The Devil...Life! ۩ Comments

well said Michael, a chant from a serene mind that drew a circle where in the game goes on while THEY wait out in pursuit..........we've to handle life with care that is so fragile.......rgrds and thanks for sharing/salu.

Sometimes we wonder! Please read 'Good And Evil.'

I enjoy the play of religion and state of mind. While I have my own idea's on design and creation, this was actually a very, very well done piece. Bravo!

This is a unique design for a poem and the resulting structure mirrors the message of the poet. His repeated mention of God and the Devil is a good poetic device but it was broken by the finish of the poem. I'd like to think this was a deliberate thing to create this mirror, but I'm not sure. I gave it a 7 for that reason. GW62

I enjoyed your poem. I hope you keep a lyric notebook. You have a musical flair. I noted in your bio that you have eclectic tastes (like me.)