There's no such thing as happy ever after
that only happens in fairy tales
silly stories of love and magic
that never could really happen
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HOW ABOUT Ever After for a title. it beats going to bed hungry! bri :)
well, Profanisaurus, a year later and it's STILL GOOD! to MyPoemList if it ain't already. I laughed at this: “witches and wizards are fine on paper and it's best that they stay that way” ta ta, for now! bri :)
well i hardly agree with P.O.View (below) that there's no problem without a solution. not if solution means an outcome that is satisfying i also disagree with M. Hammond when she writes Neither last forever. i do believe that Love can last forever (or at least until death) . oh, wait. now i've read what she said another time and i see she specified that what she said is in my world, meaning hers. that could be. i like that Profanisaurus has warned people that a happy ending is not always going to happen. it is said that one who is forewarned is forearmed. hopefully a warning will help some of us. i wouldn't mind being immortal, if it didn't come with aches, pains, fractures, and sprains. or cancer, diabetes, baldness, and senility. or loneliness, pennilessness [there is a word penniless, meaning without money; why don't they spell it pennyless? ; i made up the word pennilessness], and obsolescence (for people) . have a craze as day, John aka Profanisaurus! bri :)
Life live that way, there are always ups and downs, trails ways comes along the way to teach us how to be brave.problems always knock at your door.but there's no problem without a solution.every individual had cross to carry on.Life is full of challenges without it life can be boring..heartaches is a part in every relationship..but as the saying goes.It takes two to tangle
In my world Love happens now and then and so do headaches... Neither last forever...
To see your point nicely illustrated, refer to my poem, Wizard of Oz- -A Requiem Your poem has a simple, clear style that is appealing and suits the topic beautifully.