Wednesday, March 25, 2009

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you don't know but
when you are at your busiest,
filled with
papers,
...
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sherrie tappenden
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Phillip Sawatzky 12 April 2009

this is one of the best love poems, so detailed, that I have ever read. you have set the stage with imagery so specific and real, and then you repeat, Taking you home...and the final couplet, I am thinking of you, but you don't know....its a killer emotional link. I found myself crying when I read this. Kudos for you, friend.

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