17 Comments

to my country most heroic freedom to begin nice flow of words with complete dedication and sincerity....10

Very good flow and imagery. You gave me a sense of the moment and thought. thanks you for sharing Michael

good vision, keep up. shan

Introduce me to Didkovsky pleaes

To you Ahmad, a heart that's true. Ruthy; -D

Thank you for that Ahmad, I enjoyed it. Tight and focused, well thought through.

well penned......words for all.........sebastine

Your words are very clear but straange, although I cannot put my finger on the strangeness.

This poem is veryinteresting. What is interesting is that is so much detail and information. I believe that you didn't want to leave any suspence for your readers.

Thanks for your comment Ahmad...quite an interestig 17....is it dedovsky or didkovsky...I guess it's a textile art correct? anyway nice write.10/10

oh wow, i really like this one. i dont completely understand it either, but that makes me love it even more. i love the emotion behind the words, like your so devoted to each thing, its just breath taking. i really like the style because its so simple that its makes the meaning stand out more. like the saying 'i love you', but with your style, you dont need to say much more because of the power behind the words.

interesting im not sure i completely understand it but it doesnt need to make sense to me to be a wonderful work of art -maddy