Monday, November 3, 2014

162. 22nd September 2003 Comments

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Weak sunlight shines through the morning mist
as I lead my team in red and black on to the pitch
the opposition in yellow approach from the other side
no handshakes are shared
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Saheb Mohapatra 09 November 2014

great poem..................very nicely described...........i appreciate the style of writing....thanks.

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Ging Taping 04 November 2014

You pinned it well...but I can't relate....I know you are great in the filled you choose :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2014

In the ding moment we get penalty. very truly said everything in this poem. Really a nicely penned poem shared on.

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