161. Each Other's Stars Comments

He used to sit with his head in his hands and he'd cry she got a kick of ruining his life with her lies ...............here in the u.s., i would write got a kick out of.... is it different in u.k.? :) yeah, some women are like that. of course NO men ever are like that! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - When he used to sit and cry now together they sit and watch the night sky .............i would preface the first of these lines with Unlike. - - - - - - - - - - - - my favorite lines: they connected right from the very start and together they repaired his damaged heart the last two lines of the poem are my second favorite couplet. i agree with alesia leach's comment. i'll send it to MyPoemList. maybe the title could be Turning It Around? let me know when you have a title in place, please. or just leave it be. thanks for sharing, P. :) bri

Wonderfully penned. It started out sad but end perfectly.

Ummmm...no title at this moment but soon maybe, was thinking why 161. Oh! You wrote 161 poems already... Wish you all the joy and happiness....good luck