30/03 raped land's day..more than 60 years of occupation..many decades passed while an old lady caries her stolen home's key, wondering if this is realy what do they call civilization... a lady and a key grew old while they long to kiss that door.....to inhale that fresh air from that green land..
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Sad notes described so simply, yet so deep. Thank you for sharing, ~Besa
This land is our land Before Moses and jesus Where all prophets prayed hand by hand Read the history well, No invader stayed for ever All what we need is to be one hand
The shifting sands of time will level out one day lets hope before times run out then we can you say the eagle has landed, poem with thought for man...regards
Tamara, with all due respects...this is so far removed from the English language...it hurts. You are riding on the backs of Camels wilth no saddles. So many mistakes...I am always amazed at your popularity.
The birds are enjoying their rights, if not hit ny a missile or a bombong plane. This subjugation is unatural. for how long then, truth will live and every one will see its victory. Btrave write, with a touch of resistence writers.10++
A historic tragedy and injustice...well portrayed esoteric and portrayed sadly like the quagmire itself in an evanascent form.. well penned and great content cheers
'when the birds are flying and back with empty hand' Rachel Ann Butler
Within each lonely grain of sand.. There went many before...and who knows when it is opened.. each hand, who's name the wind blows...iip
This is a very fine poem. I loved your free flowing writing style. The wording is very nice too. Great work by the princess in PH. I hope you will write more great poems. I still remember those beautiful narrative poems you used to write. They are memorable.. 10++ def with love Shan
fine wording! significant! yesterday clicked 10 and today comment :)
the poem talks beyond the words typed in....sensitive...sentimental...10
powerful pictures. dear you are a wonderful poetess with fine and good thoughts and imagery i really really like it 10\10
Pregnant with passion that is both powerful and engaging.
I really like this poem it is a real pleasure to be able to read it. It really is an interesting write and i bet u the writer have pride in it. really liked the write keep it up thanx for asking me to read your poems =)
you have a unique way of formatting your poems...Thanks for posting this kind of theme...loved its simplicity in its expression.........
''while birds are flying and back with empty hand, ''-well written poem