(16) When He Sleeps Comments
I see his sleeping eyes in the moonlight.
He is beauty in his sleep.
I know he'll awaken and hate me;
I've gotten in too deep.
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You have a done a great work in this.. no anger or despair are expressed, sadness is expressed gently, you don't blame him either.. I'm impressed from your calmness and your satisfaction that at least he loves you when he sleeps. Keep writing! HBH
Oh, so poignant and brilliantly written. Your insight is amazing. Never stop writing! Warm regards, Seán
yes, indeed, even the worst man seems vulnerable and sweet in his sleep... great poem, amanda....I wish you all the happiness in the world..
awww how touching! i love the image of sleeping, its such a loving, cute image - if this is your state of mind at the moment i really hope your man loves you when he's awake too. great poem mate :)
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7/18/2025 12:43:15 PM # 1.0.0
How sad... I know someone like this, too. You've captured perfectly the spirit here, Amanda. Very well done. Love, CJ