Thursday, December 1, 2022

16 Secrets Of Your Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

The secrets of your heart
I try to read by my amorous eyes;
the touch of my loving fingers
leaves my message
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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boet Boet King 11 February 2025

I love this poem

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Thank you for reading this poem and leaving your thoughts on it,

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Alyx Thru Edge 23 June 2024

Very intense, full of passion, disappointment, fear of opening up in vain. My favourite part: 'my heart wet in my own tears reveal all the mysteries of the turbulent oceans to the touch of your quivering lips.'

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Man opens up easily, but woman hides her thoughts and feelings.. even her passion

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Susan Williams 18 March 2023

so very sensual but I am enamored by the way love is the context ---certainly deserving of top marks

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I tried to contain the sensuality, but somehow it escaped the captivity of my cache of emotions and spread across the poem. Thank you Susie

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" Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites". Thank You, Amber.

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Rob Lamberton 18 December 2022

Attentive ear's hearing even the whispers of silence…not relying on amorphous eyes…straining all the senses…and still a mystery! Unsearchable! Thank you! !

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I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Thank You for the invaluable words of appreciation

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fatemeh zolfagharian 17 December 2022

i didn't read it, i felt it and touched it with my fingers. Remarkable! !

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Thank You, Fatemeh for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem. Take care

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Hi Fatemeh, thank you for sharing your thoughts on the poem

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Miss Grace 16 December 2022

The poem is very wonderfully expressed. It deserve more than 5 stars

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Your words of wisdom are invaluable to me. Thank You.

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Great endearing observations Thank you

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2022

P/s I Hope to continue reading soon too, your Amazingly Beautiful series of poems on birds! .. Please take care and Stay Blessed! ..

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Thank You, Becca, for reading this and for your lovely words of appreciation. Obliged.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2022

And Congratulations! ....++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Thank You for the congratulations too

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2022

... yet to unfold... Yet to explore and hold... Beautifully expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2022

Beautifully romantic words so deep! .. The secrets of love that the heart shares and keeps....

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Hi Becca, your words are so precious for me. Thank You

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I had posted a rejoinder to the comments of Nosheen long back. My post still refuses to appear. Posted at least twice. No use. Can PoemHunter help us?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 December 2022

Congratulations for having this poem ranked # 20 on the list of 'Best Poems of Member Poets'.

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Thank You, Rose Marie, for your words of congratulations

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 December 2022

Revisiting this wonderful poem of love that holds us spellbound. Each stanza stands out expressing the deep emotions brought about by love. Beautifully written.

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Thank You for the revisit, Rose Marie. I am so grateful to you for sharing your words of appreciation. Obliged.

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This poem is ranked #20 on the list of "Best Poems of Member Poets" on PoemHunter today. Thank You, PoemHunter.

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Bharati Nayak 03 December 2022

A classic poetic way to ink the secrets of heart!

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Thank you Bharati for your time and the precious words of appreciation

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Thank You, Bharati, for your words of appreciation. And for the time too.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2022

A passionate poem revealing the secrets of the heart written with such deep feelings. Beautiful! Top score

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It is always a pleasure to read your comments on my poems. By every word, every syllable you underscore how you liked the poem. Makes me so happy, Geeta.

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This poem is ranked # 53 in the BEST POEMS OF MEMBER POETS featured on PoemHunter today. Thank You, PoemHunter, Thank you, all my fellow poets and friends.

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Who is blind enough to de-cipher the mystery of the braille of love?

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Nosheen Irfan 02 December 2022

That's a unique and classy poem. It requires many readings. It's so deep. Bravo! Great piece!

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I feel so happy that you eked out time to read this poem and print down your thoughts on it. Thank You.

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I had posted a tiny note of thanks to Nosheen here. But, it is missing yet. Can PoemHunter help us?

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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