The secrets of your heart
I try to read by my amorous eyes;
the touch of my loving fingers
leaves my message
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Very intense, full of passion, disappointment, fear of opening up in vain. My favourite part: 'my heart wet in my own tears reveal all the mysteries of the turbulent oceans to the touch of your quivering lips.'
Man opens up easily, but woman hides her thoughts and feelings.. even her passion
so very sensual but I am enamored by the way love is the context ---certainly deserving of top marks
I tried to contain the sensuality, but somehow it escaped the captivity of my cache of emotions and spread across the poem. Thank you Susie
" Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites". Thank You, Amber.
Attentive ear's hearing even the whispers of silence…not relying on amorphous eyes…straining all the senses…and still a mystery! Unsearchable! Thank you! !
I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Thank You for the invaluable words of appreciation
i didn't read it, i felt it and touched it with my fingers. Remarkable! !
Thank You, Fatemeh for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem. Take care
Hi Fatemeh, thank you for sharing your thoughts on the poem
The poem is very wonderfully expressed. It deserve more than 5 stars
Your words of wisdom are invaluable to me. Thank You.
P/s I Hope to continue reading soon too, your Amazingly Beautiful series of poems on birds! .. Please take care and Stay Blessed! ..
Thank You, Becca, for reading this and for your lovely words of appreciation. Obliged.
... yet to unfold... Yet to explore and hold... Beautifully expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Beautifully romantic words so deep! .. The secrets of love that the heart shares and keeps....
Hi Becca, your words are so precious for me. Thank You
I had posted a rejoinder to the comments of Nosheen long back. My post still refuses to appear. Posted at least twice. No use. Can PoemHunter help us?
Congratulations for having this poem ranked # 20 on the list of 'Best Poems of Member Poets'.
Thank You, Rose Marie, for your words of congratulations
Revisiting this wonderful poem of love that holds us spellbound. Each stanza stands out expressing the deep emotions brought about by love. Beautifully written.
Thank You for the revisit, Rose Marie. I am so grateful to you for sharing your words of appreciation. Obliged.
This poem is ranked #20 on the list of "Best Poems of Member Poets" on PoemHunter today. Thank You, PoemHunter.
Thank you Bharati for your time and the precious words of appreciation
Thank You, Bharati, for your words of appreciation. And for the time too.
A passionate poem revealing the secrets of the heart written with such deep feelings. Beautiful! Top score
It is always a pleasure to read your comments on my poems. By every word, every syllable you underscore how you liked the poem. Makes me so happy, Geeta.
This poem is ranked # 53 in the BEST POEMS OF MEMBER POETS featured on PoemHunter today. Thank You, PoemHunter, Thank you, all my fellow poets and friends.
Who is blind enough to de-cipher the mystery of the braille of love?
That's a unique and classy poem. It requires many readings. It's so deep. Bravo! Great piece!
I feel so happy that you eked out time to read this poem and print down your thoughts on it. Thank You.
I had posted a tiny note of thanks to Nosheen here. But, it is missing yet. Can PoemHunter help us?
I love this poem
Thank you for reading this poem and leaving your thoughts on it,