Saturday, November 19, 2011

16 Penny Nails! Comments

Rating: 3.4

strong harsh words,
16 penny nails driven
by a big hammer....
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COMMENTS
Wahab Abdul 24 May 2013

stop giving birth, stop having high hopes, there will be no want of, no frustration, no pangs or pains... Buddha did know more well...lovely.. like it..

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Karen Sinclair 19 June 2012

In each flower there is beauty and every human, hope...great thought provoker which im glad lifted the spirit by the end...

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Marites C. Cayetano 16 June 2012

I prefer to see only the beauty....

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Raja Nosherwan 12 June 2012

Good going, my good sir!

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 22 February 2012

This is so smooth...and clean...very nice poem...you are a preacher of truth....a philosopher....thanks for sharing

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 February 2012

A deeply thoughtfull piece of writing.

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Juan Olivarez 30 January 2012

Strong and powerful piece, so much truth in your words.

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Ebi Robert 03 January 2012

magical imagery on the row here. Love it.

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Ebi Robert 03 January 2012

magical imagery on the row here. Love it.

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Bulletcookie 2017 03 December 2011

Reminds me of Simon and Garfunkel 'Hammer & Nail': the laundry list of all that is human and not. Sometimes it feels like a bent 16 penny nail and other times we get driven home! Best, c...

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Jacqui Broad 19 November 2011

The walk of life. We are blessed if we can still see the beauty. I always learn from your poetry, thank you...

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