Tuesday, October 21, 2014

159. The Book Of My Life Comments

Rating: 4.0

Until the book of my life is filled
I must keep writing it
almost like a diary
of what has happened in my existence so far
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Jaden Knight
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 November 2014

Words lines and paragraphs are added more of them each day the future is left blank as the book knows not what will come to be A very good poem signifying the illusions about the future which are hidden from mankind.A good read. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Claudge Ben-at 31 October 2014

This is awesome. You don't need to go through shops just to get through you. After all. That's You.

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Gergana Teofilova 30 October 2014

Hey, I haven't seen this one before. I like it though. Everybody's life is like a book and it's only up to us what it will contain..

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2014

unlike you, i don't shy away from rereading any of my chapters, though reading them to others might horrify some or put some to sleep (from boredom) . there are a few paragraphs i will continue to keep secret until i am even older; i think REALLY old people (which i don't intend to become) may be excused for parts of their past. but i have a big mouth, so......much of what i've experienced, which others would not dare or care to share with others, i will gladly share. like my two interesting mental health arrests! they happened because about 15 years ago (when i was single, again) i made reference to my belief that suicide is a viable option to living. very interesting stuff. or my two colonoscopies (some of which is in poem form on PH) . thanks, Prof, for sharing. keep writing. bri :) p.s. you will, of course, send me a complimentary copy?

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