156. Until Time Wears It Away Comments

where was the right hand? oh, 'john'. you are getting into the habit of writing beautiful poems, which the females especially love. i would say that i love it also, but then people might talk. really though, are you sure you aren't some undiscovered-by-the-poetry-publishers great poet like............well, you know, ..........the great ones! ? keep them coming; the girls can't get enough of them! to MyPoemList.....even though i hate love poems. bri :)

Very nicely written and very sad. I hope you find peace. Thank you.

A very nostalgic poem beautifully written

In the right time you will....love love love..