Friday, August 22, 2014

154. The Path Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.3

They say that everyone has their own path
that it is laid in front of them at birth
and they must travel along it during their life
on foot or with mechanical aids
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Jaden Knight
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Chinedu Dike 18 January 2017

Insightful and philosophical piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing..

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

The paths of life need the works of the truth along them. Nice work.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 September 2015

indeed, each person has his or her path cut out; everything depends on how they walk on it and what they face while walking

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Allotey Abossey 20 May 2015

Ya right... God bless you..

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Naima Ansari 15 May 2015

a motivational poem, Mr. Westlake! It arouses us to be firm in our own way. ThankYou for sharing.

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Eleanor Byrne 10 January 2015

this poem is very inspiring.

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Alesia Leach 20 October 2014

That is fate for you and you can only hope for kindness on your journey.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2014

John Westlake writes 154. The path of life in such a beautiful way that touches heart many times. So let us travel to our own path to our final rest is the best and every one loves this. Excellent work shared on the desk.

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Clarence Prince 21 September 2014

So travel your own path to your final rest be content that you did your best. A lovely piece of work, the entire poem is! Thanks for sharing, John!

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Nancy Oyula 15 September 2014

Sounded 'inspiration-like'. I love the prudence the poem displays.

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Abekah Emmanuel 10 September 2014

Though not vividly philosophical, I like the advice that are given in this poem. The expressions are simple and straightforward. In fact, we must give helping hand to those who are in need and believe in our own principles as that will lead us to success. thanks for sharing!

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Ging Taping 03 September 2014

Fate never design our destiny.... We're the one designed our destiny and not the fate alone..

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* Sunprincess * 22 August 2014

.......great job with this write.....and it's so true....a choice can set us on a different path....

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