Wednesday, May 21, 2014

150. I’d Known You For 7 Years Comments

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I’d known you for 7 years
and in that time we seemed
to get on real well together
you seemed to have had a good run of fortune
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Jaden Knight
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bri edwards 19 January 2018

A broken mirror to this day is said to bring seven years of bad luck. This curse goes back thousands of years ago to the period of ancient Romans.........from Google. Profanisaurus, congratulations on ridding yourself of a 'BAD' friend! bri :)

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bri edwards 19 January 2018

a landmark indeed...it is. all true! ? wow, another fine write. i almost felt like i was looking over your shoulder every step of the way. to MyPoemList. it sounds like you had the proverbial (superstitious) 7 years of bad luck. you had better stay away from mirrors! ** (to be continued) ...

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Alesia Leach 05 October 2014

The misery and the pain comes out very well in the words.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 July 2014

Sad poem John but sometimes the people we care most are the ones that hurt us badly but you should not be someone's shield even when they are causing you pain and you take all the the blame, especially If its a repeated occurrence, never John...I could feel your pain in every line of this well written poem and thank you for your comments on ma poems. Siya_! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 June 2014

U gave this friend yor all and went out of the way yet they were ingrate. A lyrical appealing poem. I like readin n writin real life, realistic like u did here in this nice writin. Great to read u again.

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Kirti Sharma 22 May 2014

So bad it is when you do so much for that one person and that person betrays you... so painful... Nics poem

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