I want to decide what I do
Not hide behind you
I want to laugh and be happy
Not sad and blue
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Sounds as though there may be a little controlling by someone in this poem. You are right, you need your space and so does he. Stand true to your goals and reach out for them. Good write.
Very captivating indeed. Rich in imagery and style. I really appreciate it. An honest attempt to present your feeligs.
This is a nicely knit poetic expression of your longing to be free and happy...