Friday, December 3, 2010

15 Things I Want Comments

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I want to decide what I do
Not hide behind you
I want to laugh and be happy
Not sad and blue
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Kelli D. Williams
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Anshul Gupta 30 August 2011

This is a nicely knit poetic expression of your longing to be free and happy...

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Lynn Glover 03 December 2010

Sounds as though there may be a little controlling by someone in this poem. You are right, you need your space and so does he. Stand true to your goals and reach out for them. Good write.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 December 2010

Very captivating indeed. Rich in imagery and style. I really appreciate it. An honest attempt to present your feeligs.

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