15 Sun Sets In The Morning Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

15 Sun Sets In The Morning

Rating: 4.9


Dark are my nights.
As sun sets in the morning
Darker are my days.

Tuesday, December 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,apocalypse,melancholy,Pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was scribbled by me at a time of extreme sorrow, years back, when I felt my sun setting right before my eyes. I laid hands on it, while fudging through one of my ancient notes and thought, would share those tragic moments on ph.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 10 October 2024

There's a sunrise in the mourning that can even brighten the night!

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Grateful to you, Rob. I do hope that sun rises in everyone's life

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2024

Heaviest endurance of deepest melancholy. Superfantastically captured, Unnikrishnan Poet! I cannot find enough words to express my appreciations! . So much said in such a Brevity

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When life falls from one bottomless pit to another, nothing remains but for the free fall syndrome… thank you, Sylvia

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 August 2024

So deeply poignant and touching in just minimal lines. A vivid depiction of.melancholy.

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When sun sets in the morning, is there a glimmer of hope?

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Alyx Thru Edge 23 June 2024

Sorry you went through such a valley. This is the moment when one starts to avoid the day as it resembles the night before, the nightmares and the sweat. Also that you wrote 'darker are my days', days become darker than nights

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What I have stated here are what I have endured….

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Sun Rise 02 May 2024

"A sun sets in the morning…" Brilliant thinking!

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There are times in every life when sun sets in the morning and gloom takes over..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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