Before reluctant sun arose
one summer’s morn,
Her lithe, naked body
lay next to me
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Ray, A very sensual write. May I share with you my 'Poem Erotica' Robert
Oh how magically some are so blessed by God; this was elaborately majestic, with a real romantic flair. Brilliantly ascribe, well done~!
This metaphor is draped with quite a creative surprise, still romantically breathtaking all the same. Quite the clever muse with a charming twist of uniqueness, for sure. Brilliantly romantic~! ~Milly
Another good one from Ray, who is quickly becoming a favorite. And boy, does it ever capture the essence of those moments of ecstasy that are all too rare in most of our lives - and thus all the more precious as well. Bravo!
Such an intimate poem.............not over the edge with eroticism.........you kept it beautiful. That's nice. sincerely, Mary
Blimey Ray! I'd rather have the ecstacy than the fame, if I had the choice in your poem. The nippled pinching made me flinch though! 10 from Chocy Chip Tai! lol
I know I'll get flak for this but... Just fifteen minutes? Just kidding! Amicalement votre, Ronberge
! 5 minutes, tell me your secret. me I'm a one minute man. I know, it's sad.