Tuesday, December 6, 2005

15 Minutes Of Ecstasy (For Lovers) Comments

Rating: 4.2

Before reluctant sun arose
one summer’s morn,
Her lithe, naked body
lay next to me
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Ray Lucero
COMMENTS
Al Ramos 13 September 2008

! 5 minutes, tell me your secret. me I'm a one minute man. I know, it's sad.

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Robert E Hann 02 November 2007

Ray, A very sensual write. May I share with you my 'Poem Erotica' Robert

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Ivor Hogg 17 October 2007

it takes two make a completer entity my friend

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Lucianne Fasolo 13 September 2007

This was beautiful, I loved it! Wonderful job!

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2007

Beautiful, absolutly beautiful...........

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Milly Hunter 14 August 2006

Oh how magically some are so blessed by God; this was elaborately majestic, with a real romantic flair. Brilliantly ascribe, well done~!

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Milly Hunter 13 May 2006

This metaphor is draped with quite a creative surprise, still romantically breathtaking all the same. Quite the clever muse with a charming twist of uniqueness, for sure. Brilliantly romantic~! ~Milly

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Patricia Gale 31 March 2006

Filled with passion.Intimate in a tasteful way Patricia Gale

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Moya Levy 24 March 2006

Beautifully done Ray, tender and nice, Moyax

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Michael Stephens 21 January 2006

Another good one from Ray, who is quickly becoming a favorite. And boy, does it ever capture the essence of those moments of ecstasy that are all too rare in most of our lives - and thus all the more precious as well. Bravo!

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Mary Nagy 07 December 2005

Such an intimate poem.............not over the edge with eroticism.........you kept it beautiful. That's nice. sincerely, Mary

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***** ********* 06 December 2005

Blimey Ray! I'd rather have the ecstacy than the fame, if I had the choice in your poem. The nippled pinching made me flinch though! 10 from Chocy Chip Tai! lol

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Ronberge .. 06 December 2005

I know I'll get flak for this but... Just fifteen minutes? Just kidding! Amicalement votre, Ronberge

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 06 December 2005

Beautiful! ! Seductive! ! ! Very nice! !

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