(.................14sept5) The Unities Comments

Very skillfully executed poem there. Superlative message and smoothly crafted, to boot. Good work.

Hell, I can relate to this. Actually my blood is boiling just thinking about it, litter getting strewn about in quiet, be-yourself, serene places. You however put it calmly and engagingly. Maybe that is the trick... you put it quietly, the reader has his or her own emotions. And he or she can't fail to have his or her own emotions. t x