Friday, September 14, 2007

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I weep at the purity of a little girl
carrying a cup of hot chocolate
carefully across the room.
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Robert Howard 24 December 2007

Great word painting. Evidence for the safety of the future world demonstrated by the care taken by a child in transporting a cup of cocoa.

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Angela Barker 17 September 2007

my favorite subject is beautifully packaged here! ! ! ! ! ! Children and the protection of them is a passion f mine. You conveyed the innocence and delight a child can bring into the world so wonderfully! ! I am amost at a loss for words.

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Max! I had never thought of thinking of things in such a way. Yes, the old cliche of 'children are our future' (Whitney?) put in a much fresher way and sort of reversed. Or sort of not. Hmmn, not sure on that point actually. But I digress. (your fault) . I love this. The initial part is trademark Max - an everyday observation given poignancy of the highest order and thoughts springing forth. The rest doesn't disappoint. Lovely and somehow significant. Thank you. t x

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