Monday, May 19, 2014

147. The Star Of The Pitch Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the dark winter skies above the pitch
a new star shines bright for all to see
not just in his teammate’s hearts
but in our minds
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 01 January 2015

i wonder, did he also show politeness toward the referees? a good example to follow, Profanisaurus! :) bri

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Alesia Leach 26 October 2014

A wonderful dedication.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 26 May 2014

This is strong and powerfullly written, great work

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 26 May 2014

This is strong and powerfullly written, great work

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Sharilynn Reaser 22 May 2014

I like the honesty of this poem and the reverence towards the person it's about.

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Sharilynn Reaser 22 May 2014

I like the honesty of this poem and the love and tenderness towards the person it's about.

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