146. Fallen Angel Rises Comments

A lovely dream perhaps?

nice vry nice i l o v e t h i s p o e m

was the robe raged or ragged? and i 'm trying to picture her bursting a flame; does that mean she burst into flames or that a flame shot out of her mouth? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i got this from a wikipedia article about the word reform: Re-form A note about spelling: when used to describe something which is physically formed again, such as re-casting it in a mold/mould, or a band that gets back together, the proper term is re-form (with a hyphen) , not reform. ========================== you've got face lovely face ....................i think you told me once that you type poems on a small screen and may not proofread before submitting to PH. it might keep me from stopping to comment so often if you [and others] would proofread more and/or better. this is a friendly suggestion. no harm meant! [or did you MEAN to write face lovely face? ] - - - - - - - - - - - - - the last two stanzas more than made up for any errors earlier. i REALLY liked them (the last two stanzas) ! ! ! ! i wish some chick would drop a load of diamonds at MY feet for being a nice guy! - - - - - - - - - - - as for the (no) rape part: i'm glad you mentioned it. i guess it is realistic enough. maybe if she hadn't looked so bad when he met her [in Fallen Angel] it would have been a different story. just joking, sort of; sorry! thanks for sharing. bri :) i hope all readers realize this poem is a sequel to your poem 145. Fallen Angel. i liked that one better, but this one is good. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -