142. What Began In Earth Comments

Civil unrest? I think it has already begun. Nice piece.

John, some nice rhymes. some of them could easily be made even better by careful attention. ask me if you are interested. and i believe you left out a couple of small words in your haste to submit, though i must confess i sometimes catch an error of mine after submitting one of my poems [rarely! ]. i proofread several times whose plan? ? is this about aliens taking control of earthlings/earth by promoting unrest? . The governments would only be able to silence a little as the relationships between voters and voted are so brittle not even to rulers will be able to watch and laugh ..........................the first two lines may be my favorites. but in line three, do you mean to write to rulers? some other favorite lines: not a human will left alive to tell the story of mankind and its spectacular fall from glory ................yes, some of mankind's existence has been glorious i guess, but plenty has not been. : ( thanks for sharing. bri :)