141. Truth's Battle Comments
In the last days the end of times
under a dying sun and decaying moon
doped up on a cocktail of lies and falsehoods
and believing themselves invincible
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nice write. my favorite stanza is: Like the leaves off the trees in autumn the soldiers of the deceivers fall to against their foes cut down by gleaming swords and axes shattered by heavy maces and war hammers every strike seems to fell a man carving and smashing through steel and flesh the grassy plains become swamped with rivers of black blood this should be in 3-D when it gets to the movie theatres/theaters! at first i thought you might have meant to write: .....leaves OF the trees..., but then i decided....leaves OFF the trees... works better, when joined with fall in the next line. yeah, i always shine up my sword and ax before entering the field of battle. i like the way they gleam before they begin doing their jobs and start to get encrusted with blood and other gore. thanks for sharing. bri :)
nice write. my favorite stanza is: Like the leaves off the trees in autumn the soldiers of the deceivers fall to against their foes cut down by gleaming swords and axes shattered by heavy maces and war hammers every strike seems to fell a man carving and smashing through steel and flesh the grassy plains become swamped with rivers of black blood this should be in 3-D when it gets to the movie theatres/theaters! at first i thought you might have meant to write: .....leaves OF the trees..., but then i decided....leaves OFF the trees... works better, when joined with fall in the next line. yeah, i always shine up my sword and ax before entering the field of battle. i like the way they gleam before they begin doing their jobs and start to get encrusted with blood and other gore. thanks for sharing. bri :)
Wow this poem is filled with emotions and thoughts well written and very strong Well done
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nice write. my favorite stanza is: Like the leaves off the trees in autumn the soldiers of the deceivers fall to against their foes cut down by gleaming swords and axes shattered by heavy maces and war hammers every strike seems to fell a man carving and smashing through steel and flesh the grassy plains become swamped with rivers of black blood this should be in 3-D when it gets to the movie theatres/theaters! at first i thought you might have meant to write: .....leaves OF the trees..., but then i decided....leaves OFF the trees... works better, when joined with fall in the next line. yeah, i always shine up my sword and ax before entering the field of battle. i like the way they gleam before they begin doing their jobs and start to get encrusted with blood and other gore. thanks for sharing. bri :)