Tuesday, May 6, 2014

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Though I know you not very well
and we have never met
I would like to tell you something
I hope you’ll never forget
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 13 May 2014

when you told me how just how much it meant ...........i think one how too many. ;) my first impression of this is: very nice job! and rhythm and rhymes are very good. i just hope you can keep your promise to someone(s) you hardly have had time to know............and that, i guess, just over the infamous internet! i must say, however, that your words DO sound comforting. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Gergana Teofilova 13 May 2014

Very nice poem. It vividly depicts what friendship is all about- sharing and trusting one other. Well done!

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Katie Kelley 06 May 2014

love this poem! you are a wonderful writer.

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Felicia Manning 06 May 2014

You are such a romantic :) I love these lines: No secrets you share will ever be passed on I’ll still keep it safe when I’m dead and gone. Being able to tell someone your deepest darkest truths and knowing they will accept you, they will not judge or betray you. Loved this.

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