Tuesday, April 25, 2006

(14) Writing My Messages In The Sand Comments

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I used to write you messages in the sand, Mother.
I knew they'd be erased
with the night's rising waters,
but I always took comfort
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Amanda Lukas
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Peter A. Crowther 06 September 2006

Very poignant and thoughtful like so many of your poems

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Seán O' Muiriosa 08 May 2006

So beautiful and poignant. Any words I write here cannot express just how brilliantly you've written this poem. It's very personal and yet I can feel it will have reached out and touched many readers already. Sincerely, Seán

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Amanda Lukas

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Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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