Tuesday, July 6, 2021

14 An Orphaned Pair Of Shoes Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Was an old picture
Of a few mothers
Grieving over two coffins.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx Thru Edge 23 June 2024

So true: 'Only flags change, The faces of mothers Remain the same! '. Democracy and (moral) justice die in front of steely armours of a too tight ego defense

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Susan Williams 30 January 2023

powerful words selected well---a poem deserving of more than 5 stars

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Susie, thank you for the appreciation., for the good words. So happy to see you active on PoemHunter. Thank you

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soren Barrett 05 July 2022

Tragic but war is as old as mn and it doesn't look like it will change soon. Well written

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Thank You for your time and the magnificent words

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Bri Edwards 05 June 2022

I used to support Amnesty International, but, as with other 'things' i've 'done' in my lifetime, I no longer am affiliated with it, BUT IT MAY be a group to look at.

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Sure. Thank You Bri.

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Shining Sun 14 April 2022

Nicely written. I felt great reading the poem

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Autocracy has the same face anywhere

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Feel immense pleasure that you enjoyed the poem. Thank You Poet

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KOMBE SAKWE KOFI 08 April 2022

Arts

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My gratitude

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A most welcome comment

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Esselebor Ebhojie 11 December 2021

Good governance goes beyond political competition to progress and development.The human angle must not be overlooked

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Very true, dear poet. No government should lose sight of humaneness.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 December 2021

My gratitude to poets Robert Murray Smith, Lyn Paul and David Wood for reading this poem and marking their observations. Obliged to all.

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David Wood 10 December 2021

Very powerful write. Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts totally.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Hi David, As Robert says, world is not what we would like it to be.

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Lyn Paul 10 December 2021

A powerful write expressing power and heartache.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Hi Lyn, thank yyou for visiting my pages and recording your observations on the poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 November 2021

Part 2 and great poet Paramashwaran Nair for bestowing their precious time to read this poem and share the comments

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 November 2021

Thanks from the bottom of my heart to Poets M Asim Nehal, Rose Marie, Varsha, the talented poet hiding behind the pen name Poetic Sky, Becca, my dear friend and much published author Bharati

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Rebecca Navarre 19 July 2021

The Lord needs to hear prayers on such as this! .. So very heart breaking! .......

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Yes! May Lord provide those who suffer under the autocratic rule, with the power of endurance and may He force the rulers see reason.

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Rebecca Navarre 19 July 2021

A deeply heart moving poem! .. So sorrowful and insightful! .. i did not know. Excellently expressed! .. Very powerful! .. Thank you for sharing! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Hi Bharati, thank you from the bottom of my heart, for reading the poem and recording your appreciation. Obliged.

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Bharati Nayak 09 July 2021

Omar wrote below 'When I look at this picture I wonder what does the war mean. Only flags change, The faces of mothers Remain the same! '----What a touching write!

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A meaningless rivalry on ego, nothing else. Mankind has to think properly on humanity. Thank you dear friend for sharing

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Thank you, dear poet, for identifying with the cause

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Varsha M 07 July 2021

Sir they fool us for their benefit.

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Varsha M 07 July 2021

Unii sir this is beautiful. Politics is fatherless. It knows nothing but treason. The first chapter of life is forgiveness and the last chapter of life is forgiveness. In between there is no space for pollution like this still people encroach in name of religion.

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Poetic Sky 07 July 2021

The truth as straight as an arrow. Well said.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 July 2021

May I invite you to read my poem "Of Tribes and Turbulence", on my take on how we should guard democracy

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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