Wednesday, December 7, 2005

.14) A Meditation On Words Comments

Rating: 3.1

Domestic words
are yoked for work.
They will not
tell you secrets.
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COMMENTS
Robert Howard 23 April 2007

I agree with G Murdock on the process. We need both the mild and wild ones when the time is right. Sometimes I get burned out on the same old words then something strange and/or vivid happens and the old words line up in a different way and less familiar words pop up off the bench, jumping up and down screaming, 'Put me in coach.'

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Julia Klimenova 12 February 2006

It's just the way I feel, except that with me words fly off in the season of quiet and come back when my life seems out of kilter. A beautiful poem. I loved it. Julia

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G. Murdock 21 December 2005

This was a treatise on the process of poetry. I enjoyed the way you blended the internal and external elements of nature...like an accomplished landscaper. Excellent rendering Max.

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Ulrike Gerbig 08 December 2005

very true! i like this! u.

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Ernestine Northover 07 December 2005

This is a very pleasurable poem to read, Max, I shall have to look for some 'quiet time' and see if inspiration comes to the fore. Thanks. Love Ernestine XXX

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Linda Hepner 07 December 2005

Really liked this! Those words will come up from the depths, not always welcome guests.

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Raynette Eitel 07 December 2005

Max, this is surely one of your best. The contrast between domestic words and 'wild words' settling across a page is well though out. Thanks for this. Raynette

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Michael Shepherd 07 December 2005

... and sometimes they sneak into the domestic word-coop and lo! in the pages of Poemhunter lay every day golden eggs ... you too Max!

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Mary Nagy 07 December 2005

Great images to give to this topic............very nice Max. Sincerely, Mary

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Louise Mcvicar 07 December 2005

really clever! I thought it was great!

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