Monday, December 12, 2011

13th December - My Birth Day Comments

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13TH DECEMBER,1955
On this day, I came to this world
I cried for, where I came and with
What destiny of my life
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ramesh rai
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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 15 October 2014

what a piece vividly reflecting emotions...happy to read this....Sir, mine is Dec 15! !

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Akhtar Jawad 17 May 2014

Every new born child comes in this world with a message that God is not yet dejected with the human beings(Tagore) A nice poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2014

You have expressed nice thoughts on your birthday. You have remembered your parents, and family members. You have looked back at the last five decades of your life and felt reassured: 'Yet hopeful for my life with gross achievement as the resonance of all hope and belief of my parents and all well wishers are still ALIVE.' - Very well done!

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 December 2013

Many many Happy returns of the day. Please do accept my belated wishes. Superb write. Loved reading it.

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Shahzia Batool 13 December 2013

Hopes and beliefs of well-wishers, and Dad's expectations can never be wrong...the first cry of a baby proclaims his arrival and substantial existence in the world, not any sadness... Happy Birthday! ! !

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Suman Kumar Das 27 November 2013

superb! .........................beautifully expressed.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 17 November 2013

Look at this way: You went through many many tribulation in your life, however you should be happy, because you became better, wiser and stronger. Anyway, you will have problems, until you get to the point, that you cannot take anymore, that will be the time you will calm down, turn away from the problems, still do your best to solve them, but the more you turn away and do not let it bother you, your life will became better and better. It did for me. Now I am living in the 23rd Psalm.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

I happened to see your Birthday poem just now. Anyway the coming birthday I will definitely wish you..Beautiful day to born with. Especially parents are so happy to have you.. Life can never be zero... Your poems definitely works wonders..Your knowledge is your power....Keeping parents and family happy is very important. friends may be feeling good about you..So how can a life be zero...It is filled with treasures of happiness. Very lovely poem..But I will wish you on coming Dec 13th.

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Heather Wilkins 14 June 2013

excellent write Ramesh. Happy Birthday and many more returns.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 August 2012

beautiful with nice last stanza 10

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Anu Sipps 25 February 2012

LIKE YOUR POEM SO NICE ONE

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Unwritten Soul 08 February 2012

Oh i am sure after 5decades you go through no not have 0 anymore but uncountable...it just you dont know how to count them.. :) , Ramesh i hope you still accept my wish Happy belated birthday i missed almost about a month...but the wish is eternal green...with the life you have now i hope you make all around happy with your presence...Your mom wish still true, and your dad said nothing less than to be real for you..keep it up, nice writing, that''s how 5decades work...polishing your talent.._Unwritten Soul

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Neetha Sasidharan 31 December 2011

be positive..hv faith in ur talents.. u r a grt poet..ur poems says dat... ur dad was correct.... nice poem

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Sajna Kailas 19 December 2011

Five decades of my life is passed still the achievement of my life appears to be zero by zero.by this stanza you showed that how humble you are! ! ! As a person you are a great man, very clever and Intelligent. and a nice human being, a citizen of the world! I miss to read this in dec 13th but happy to read this! ! ! God bless you! ! ! ! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 December 2011

just still being alive at your age is alone quite an achievement, , , , your poetry is known all over the world now, , , that too is another achievement...great write Ramesh...

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