139. Truth Comments

Very beautiful and well written. You did and excellent job :)

This is very beautifully written, but at the same time has a calmer and down to earth tone. It's very relatable in many senses, and contains a philosophy sort of feel. What I really like is how it can be interpreted in many different ways which still contain a common theme of Don't just believe everything you're told, Whether it's religion or just teachings in general, this is a very relatable poem to many people. I look forward to reading more from you.

Well all of us is carrying our truth within our inner soul......Being you is you know what is truth lies on you... nobody can stand on you if you are in your truth way of living... Just to be in your Naked is enough for us to live and enjoy our life with His Presence to us...Isn't it?

Very strong and (of course) truthful. I especially liked that last line; but if I can be cheeky and make one suggestion follow your own path and keep asking questions I think you did a good job with this poem of truth.

Yes my religion is against blind faith and exhorts sincere questioning since they lead to true answers. I liked the unique great style of yor poem. Swell!