Thursday, June 25, 2009

(138) Right Answer (Silssa 1983 - 99) Comments

Rating: 2.8

Am I sailing in a sinking boat?
When will I come out of
This octopus hands?
When will I be able to start
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Maitreyee Joshi 27 June 2009

silssa was a good poetess herself, its so very evident.thanks for sharing

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Ravi Sathasivam 27 June 2009

A soul piercing poem to read. Very touching poem.

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Pandian Angelina 26 June 2009

What do we say, to this child But, face the wall and silently weep. Leena

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Aiswarya. T.anish 26 June 2009

This is indeed a touching poem............loved it.10+++++++

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Nooruddeen Mm 26 June 2009

Poor girl, sympathetic Boat is keep on sinking, she never know that Keeps some expectation still she For a bright coming days and a normal life as well

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Ency Bearis 26 June 2009

and the color of frustration is pinching the reality..well implied...

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rago rago 26 June 2009

emotions rule us.......... and we feel the pain in the heart..... squeezing us.......

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 June 2009

Last 7 lines are touching. Well expressed.

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Surya . 26 June 2009

the feeling, hits you hard surya

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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

Just the thought that it brings to one's heart, a soul piercing piece to read...

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Indira Babbellapati 26 June 2009

suffering helps soul ripen faster. may be it's an unconscious decision as it knows that the time is less...

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Christina Phan 26 June 2009

wow great write 10+++ its have so much emotion n pain written in this one

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