138. I Saw You At The Park The Other Day Comments

A very wonderful and emotional piece. I like the imagery, very sad and emotional. The blend of the rain and the tears makes it fantastic. It is really sad, when lovers, who still love each other, eventually seperate. However, what belongs to you will surely come back to you. Well written......keep it up!

The saddest part in every relationship is leaving goodbye! Who knows at the end of the road...might be two of you will be together again. Just keep holding on..if it is meant to be..meant to be Heartbreaking poem

john, these are some of my favorite lines from your outstanding poem. [if i were a romantic, i might have chosen other lines for applause.] your long purple coat almost soaked through bag swinging from its one remaining handle your long dark hair being blown about in the strong wind thanks for sharing. bri :)

Wow..a heart-touching poem! While i read word-by-word I found a clear picture in my mind showing how two close buddies became strangers.

This is really good expressive writing

Wow that was beautiful...I like the last line in contrast with the rainy day and corresponding emotion.

So sad, what a wonderful poem.

while reading this, it seemed so vivid for me. Truly a sad event, at the same time though the longer you wait to reconcile the fewer your chances of getting back together are. ~Nika

hey, the poem is almos discribed about strangers.....! A very nice poem

I wish all guys were like this. Girls dream about guys that can love that deeply. very nice poem.