Thursday, June 25, 2009

(137) The Color Of Death (Silssa 1983 - 99) Comments

Rating: 2.8

It’s dawn now. The slanting rays of the morning light fall on the window sill. I have to go now, to the world of medicines, drips, ivy’s and blood.
I walked near it…As I put the first foot, I heard the cry of agony which spread over my mind like my ‘dove dress’ spread with blood. I went to my wards…Fifteen rooms…appeared to me as fifteen prisons…with inmates waiting for their destiny…Either to life or to…no... I don’t want to fill it up…

As I pushed the first door, I saw him sleeping…smiling face with his little finger in his mouth…I didn’t want to break a three year olds dream… but my duty is forcing me. I took his finger out from mouth. He started and opened his little eyes…his eyes – without eyebrows and eyelashes – coming to know the cruel reality from sweet unreality. I felt his lips are ready to put his agony out.
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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 June 2009

really God is selfish.. he takes away the lives of innocents rather than killing sinners. Your sister had gr8 potentiality in writing.. n u shud be happy she exposed her skills before moving away.

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Ravi Sathasivam 27 June 2009

Very well written. Also expressed how painful one feels. beautiful.

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Nooruddeen Mm 26 June 2009

It is the page torn out from her heart Can't you see the blood stains at the edges of this page…

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Ency Bearis 26 June 2009

the color of pain is well expressed....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 June 2009

ahhh! ! ................. well writen indeed! 10+

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Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009

Thank you so much for sharing this with us Premji...10++++

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rago rago 26 June 2009

the colour of death is neither black nor white....... black because we fear and give the thing of mourning...... white because to shine...... when I read I mourn in heart I have no words in me......... I lost my mother and I know the pain how we feel without mother`s love........ and loosing sister the grief is much more.....

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 June 2009

Very well expressed how painful one feels. Very well written.

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Surya . 26 June 2009

those whom god loves most he calls early. be happy that way. what else can i say surya

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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

The color of death that we all knew that it will come to us in due time. But reading these pieces make my heart squeeze to death.

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Indira Babbellapati 26 June 2009

just a month ago, a young boy of 19 succumbed to kidney failure...my 'just a mother' is about his mother...the solace is we took a conscious decision of not hospitalizing the boy. Thank god, he left ythis world without further torture to his body in the name of hospitalization!

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Christina Phan 26 June 2009

awwww im srry i want to cry well done 10+++

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