Thursday, April 10, 2014

136. Lost Friends Comments

Rating: 4.8

They say that everyone has at least one person
that they have left behind in their life
some they regret losing and want them back
others long forgotten and now are mere memories
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 14 January 2015

i like how you reused lines 1 & 2 as lines 39 & 40. all in all, i have about as many people in my life now as i can or wish to deal with. true, i sometimes think what happened to her? or i wonder if he is still alive. i also sometimes think, what will people on PH (or elsewhere) think if they stop hearing from/of me? some (maybe all, in the case of PH) will never know if i got thrown in jail, died, got tired of it all, or forgot how to type. Well Profanisaurus, if you outlast me on PH, let me assure you that i have enjoyed knowing you and reading (most of) your poetry. best wishes, always. bri :)

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Susan Lacovara 14 April 2014

Now I feel like making a list.....who to keep, who to seek, who to leave, who to retrieve....Thanks for pointing out what we hardly knew we always knew! Saving to my favorite list. Bravo!

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