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You’ve been there for me such a long time
I count you as a near constant companion
sometimes a friend sometimes a foe
but even so you’ve often been there when I needed
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Jaden Knight
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Nika Mcguin 30 March 2014

This is wonderful. I like that you started the poem not saying exactly who it was, and it sounds like a letter to a lifelong friend. Honestly thanks for this poem. Its been a long time since I've thought about the existence of guardian angels. Just goes to show you how long I've been on the edges of religion. This poems has brought back memories from childhood when I read about guardian angels and contemplated the existence of my own. Who knows how many times I've been saved and never giving thanks for any of it, this poem puts me to shame! ~Nika

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Tanya Gupta 30 March 2014

great job...........i was feeling my emoyions when reading it. please come to my page and read my poems, i know i am too young but have some true dreams. please come i'll be so glad thanks!

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Noreen Carden 29 March 2014

I love the idea of thanking your guardian angel through poetry. The poem flows beautifully and is a lovely read Well done

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