(From morning i was occupied fully by the reverberating thoughts of Amma; started writing in the morning and completed now; submitting at Her golden feet)
Blooming as the flower
In the stony heart
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How do u know her clothes are soft? Your imaginary is great. You have the power of 'Bhava'. Amma is as soft as a petal of fresh rose. The way you have written the poem shows you had taken Her darshan, though you say ' not yet'. Sometimes I feel PH is a heap of emotional garbage. So many meaningless poems are poured into it day by day. But it has gems too like yours.
your poems have deep meaning I would say they are potential classics, wish you all the best